AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

Audience Feedback:

  In terms of audience we didn't receive much feedback except that we delivered good ideas in our pitch and the video ideas that we had, however we were also asked whether the two main characters would be the only ones being shown in the video our response was that we would include other participants alongside the two main characters. Moreover the audience understood the general theme  but not the narrative but in our response we mentioned that we would go along with the formation of the song and along with the lyrics, we would show how their love changes through time but also a montage of how it used to be using different shots.
The changes made was what we included in our location which was the idea of filming in a hotel to make the artist look as though they are in their room. Now we've changed it into shooting it in the artists house (room). 

PITCH

TREATMENT

CREATIVE IDEAS

Summary:

This song is about a female who is deeply in love that she is lost in her own feelings about the guy she loves.  In the lyrics where its states that her love was “delusional” it explores the concept of unconditional love associated with a mental illness. She had a belief maybe better things would come, things she wished for but those things are so distant, almost human it's like she doesn't deserve for her dreams to happen like everyone else she lived in denial, denying this hopelessness she feels.. I think the promises she made and broke was for herself, her love didn't become better as she wished to be. so she has nothing left, feeling the cruelty of the world that could be one the reasons why she may feel as though she is no longer living in this world but lost in paradise. In order to adapt/show this in our video we would need ensure that we shoot in various areas that are not really surrounded by many people except from scenes we show her having fun with other people and her lover.

 

 

"Lost In Paradise" by Rihanna

How was I to know that my love was delusional?
Somebody tell me how to mend a broken-hearted soul
In love we all will fall but we fell a little harder
What am I supposed to do with this heart?

It may be wrong but it feels right to be lost in paradise

I'm so lost in paradise (lost in paradise)
If I open up my eyes
I can see the storm, I can see the sky
I can see the darkness, flashing lights
All my fears gone tonight
Let me stay, I'm lost in paradise

(Bass slap)

How was I to know that my love was delusional?
Somebody tell me how to mend a broken-hearted soul
In love we all will fall but we fell a little harder
What am I supposed to do with this heart?

It may be wrong but it feels right to be lost in paradise

I'm so lost in paradise (lost in paradise)
If I open up my eyes
I can see the storm, I can see the sky
I can see the darkness, flashing lights
All my fears gone tonight
Let me stay, I'm lost in paradise

(Bass slap)

What am I supposed to do with this heart? [3x]

It may be wrong but it feels right to be lost in paradise

I'm so lost in paradise (lost in paradise)
If I open up my eyes
I can see the storm, I can see the sky
I can see the darkness, flashing lights
All my fears gone tonight
Let me stay, I'm lost in paradise

I'm so lost in paradise (lost in paradise)
If I open up my eyes
I can see the storm, I can see the sky
I can see the darkness, flashing lights
All my fears gone tonight
Let me stay, I'm lost in paradise

(Bass slap)

 

 

 

 

CREATIVE IDEAS

In this lesson we started to discuss what we wanted to do for our production. My group decided that we would go for creating a music video instead of a short film. We then decided to brainstorm ideas of the genres that we could choose to develop into. Our top 3 best ideas of what genre we should go into were POP, R&B and Soul music, after having chosen these genres we began to look into the type of songs we could use for production. we found out that the songs were either to fast or we just didn't approve of how we could construct it to become a music video. This is when we started looking deeper into the genre of R&B and the different artists that were in this field. One group member looked more into the idea of using a female artist (Rihanna) whom performs in the field of R&B,  we all agreed to look into her music and the ones that have not been released yet and found a song we could use "Lost In Paradise"

CASE STUDY

Task 2 Case Study  #3

CASE STUDY

Task 2 Case Study #2

CASE STUDY

Task 2 Case Study  #1

PRODUCTION SCHEDULE

Wk. 1	September 9th	10th  September	11th September	12th September	13th September
					-Task1 – hand in Creative ideas/ scheduling   -Task2 – start on  Research/ case studies
Wk. 2	16th September	17th September	18th September	19th September	20th September
	-Task2 upload case study and hand it in.   - Task3 treatment
Wk. 3	23rd September	24th September	25th September	26th September	27th September
	-Task3 – treatment   -Task4 – Focus groups/ pitch
Wk. 4	30th September	1st October	2nd October	3rd October	4th October
	-Task4 – focus groups/ pitch				-Task4 – focus groups/pitch   -Task 5- Pre-production
Wk. 5	7th October	8th October	9th October	10th October	11th October
				-Task6	-Task7
Wk. 6	14th October	15th October	16th October	17th October	18th October
Wk. 7	21st October	22nd October	23rd October	24th October	25th October
	-Task5- hand ion pre-production   -Task6 – start shooting the video	Shooting video-	Shooting video-
Wk. 8	28th October	29th October	30th October	31st October	1st November
Wk. 9	4th November	5th November	6th November	7th November	8th November
Wk. 10	11th November	12th November	13th November	14th November	15th November
	-Task6- deadline for shooting the video	-Task7- Start editing the video
Wk.11	18th November	19th November	20th November	21st November	22nd November
Wk. 12	25th November	26th November	27th November	28th November	29th November
Wk. 13	2nd December	3rd December	4th December	5th December	6th December
					-Task6- deadline for editing
Wk. 14	9th December	10th December	11th December	12th December	13th December
	-Task8- Research and planning the CD/DVD cover and advert	-Task8	-Task8	-Task8	-Task8
Wk. 15	16th December	17th December	18th December	19th December	20th December
	-Task8	-Task8	-Task8- Deadline for Case Studies		(Christmas Break)
Wk. 16	23rd December	24th December	25th December	26th December	27th December
	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)
Wk. 17	30th December	31st December	1st January	2nd January	3rd January
	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)	(Christmas Break)
Wk.18	6th January	7th January	8th January	9th January	10th January
	-Task8- Research and planning documents deadline